Like Water on a Lily Pad April 25, 2011April 25, 2011 / blueplatypus Gently pooling Rivulets flow Off the green Teflon surface; Pond ripples Do not disturb The serenity Of the lily. Share this:FacebookXLike Loading... Related
wow, you put a big smile on my face. divine imagery how are you? visit me to claim 3 awards in my post… have fun! this piece is stunning..keep it up. share one with poetry potluck today. Reply
Serenity is something I ache for……and this post gave me a lovely little snippet of that! Thanks! Reply
wow, you put a big smile on my face.
divine imagery
how are you?
visit me to claim 3 awards in my post…
have fun!
this piece is stunning..keep it up.
share one with poetry potluck today.
welcome, have fun!
love the lily pond image, elegant entry.
hmmm peaceful write and pic..nice!
enjoy the rally!
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Reading this poem evokes a calm serenity. Lovely in it’s simpleness.
Teflon surface…new image for my mind of lilies! Well written.
Gorgeous imagery đŸ™‚
Emits a feeling of calm, really like it.
Green teflon surface is a beautiful expression. Great image.
a serene prompt piece, your words serve the image very well…Rose
Serenity is something I ache for……and this post gave me a lovely little snippet of that! Thanks!
Aaaahhhhh…I’d like to sit and hear the birds and all will be well with the world. Beautiful.
Beautiful image and poem =)